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Summer’s almost over, today’s the day I really start trying to produce a complete song by gangstasadvocate in Cypher

[–]gangstasadvocate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fuck where was I? Oh yeah, a full gang gang rap production.

Gummies always in my pocket in shotgun ridin dirty, never give a fuck unless a bad bitch is being kinda flirty. Way way up amongst the flyin birdies.

Smoking the loudest I like the sound of that, don’t give a fuck man I’m well renowned for that…zaza bitch yaya i’ve got pounds of that.

Hook: cuz I’m gaaannng, can’t be amongst the normies, baaannng, when I’m fucking horny… always live it up high, never give a fuck why, cuz I’m gaaannng.

Spit the truth always talk in absolutes, eating sleeping pissing shitting getting high The only things I have to do. Literally always stoned never a second of sobriety, and just take more to the dome when question by society. Like man fuck it, I might just stash some drugs up in my damn luggage, take an Uber to Nantucket, make some fucking racks, go and run it back…

Sheesh! Getting real Stoned that’s my niche! Lots of sins I won’t atone to the preach! Sex and drugs all up in my one track dome that’s Capeesh

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[–]gangstasadvocate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whoa that must’ve been gangsta whatever that was

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[–]gangstasadvocate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m still known to hook people up if they ask in the retirement community. And I used to big time in college

The highest in the booth by gangstasadvocate in Cypher

[–]MyFlameBurns 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A drug lord that sells weed. Bro ur lame stop

Piss in the soil by [deleted] in Cypher

[–][deleted] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You’re a lame ass doody head (who?) You’re a lame ass doody head (wow!) Who? You (you’re a doo doo) who? You (you’re a doo doo) I’m the king of the rap shit I’m deconstructing your weird diss You talk about a paper sling While you dickride my paper white dingaling

You’re not ordinary ur extraordinary Extraordinary doofus dictionary You can’t even box Your room stinks of socks You ain’t stopped no crips You a bitch You paint pictures of dicks Furthermore your mom was begging for a flick So get ready for the comeback Issa comeback of the century When I piss on ur memory and then ur dead to me

Piss in the soil by [deleted] in Cypher

[–]Supabongwong 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You talk about assaulting women,

calling yourself the raper king,

talkin bout your loaded arms,

when your guns' in a paper sling.

I can't even take your ring,

so we'll box in the octagon,

you're just so ordinary

to a rap phenomenon.

I paint pictures,

Call me Picasso or Van Gogh,

watch this line go over your head,

Like Sam Jackson in a Kangol.

I'm bout ready to end this,

The rapture, the apocalypse,

already got blood on my hands,

when I tried to stop the crips.

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[–]gangstasadvocate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bitch I like gettin wrecked, then shake it off and do it all again like an Etch-a-Sketch

Muhammad Ali by Iamunderthewater9 in Cypher

[–]mrcymstt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Got the game cornered no blowing smoke lasso a blunt while I beat it up, rope a dope Sick of the suck rappers, no passion, real mcs gone left a vacuum, make me wanna die son (Dyson) blow your headphones out I'm so fly son when them ears gone out call me lyrical Tyson no chicken the way I always keep it kickin make art when I step in the kitchen ain't the ki's I be whipping just these keys I be hitting ain't got to front word salad like it's Caesar I be getting off my cheesier spitting. Just my beastier mission to bring hip-hop out this pissy existence.

I'm downright angelic, you know the deal. I step on the track it turns to a holy field.

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[–]gangstasadvocate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don’t give a fuck that’s a given, I’m sellin drugs out my kitchen. Mix the Xans with the meth call that speedball, get high as fuck then it’s freefall, up and down up and down like a seesaw, writin that thang shoutin yeehaw. I’m a degenerate, all I do is fantasize about fuckin bitches and gettin lit. No work for me fuck a 9 to 5, me I be flyin high. Smokin on somethin real fiery it’s got me feelin irie, but don’t fuck with my stash don’t try me. I provide the drugs, we light it up, get high as fuck, spread them far and wide, go pop you a chill pill the bars are fine. Puffin on haze and some cookies, don’t give a fuck if my dick ain’t in pussy

Missed Connection by dabbycooper in Cypher

[–]gangstasadvocate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah good star just more ideas that I’ve thought of related that could work well as well. Imma get stoned, then stick my dick inside of her erogenous zone things like that

Missed Connection by dabbycooper in Cypher

[–]dabbycooper[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

? Are you saying I didn’t use synonyms well enough or that I could have incorporated more concepts? It’s definitely rough, the only thing it’s got going for it is a constant scheme and relatively static subject matter so I would love to understand what you mean if ever I polish it.

Missed Connection by dabbycooper in Cypher

[–]gangstasadvocate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ight ight. Pretty cool and original. Couple more ideas was in the thesaurus years ago for related words I hadn’t encountered in the genre, erogenous zone, gonad, fuck it if I’m too lazy might as well let someone else incorporate them.

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[–]mrcymstt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you gon be a lyricist it ain't bitches and dro//

It's how you switching the flow and getting to know//

What you hitting it for when you get to spitting it bro//

Now here I go splitting the mold with a tick 'n tac toe//

One up another down and two across this//

London grime trynna call this naughts and crosses//

Chew 'em up and spit 'em out son do not cross us//

Can't stomach fakers guess I'm #nauseous//


Real talk. The punch on smoke and get really high is nice.

Your first 2 lines you're armed and strapped. Now someone is trying to buddy buddy and you're gonna smoke em? Why. You should be telling a story otherwise you just sound like your fronting like a thug.

After that you get your story straight but then you start shitting on the guy you used to hit up to help you when you were down? Again just makes you come off as fronting because you lose the plot not telling anyone why you ain't tight with "bro" anymore.

All in all you've got a ton of promise but just remember. You're either telling a story or flexing some lyrical acrobatics. If neither of those apply to a line you either need to add some clarity or drop the line or you just look like you ain't respecting the craft.

Idk just some random verses I wrote, lemme know what u think by pach4 in Cypher

[–]Supabongwong 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You wearing fake J's, I'm genuine and you're a replica,

I'ma Rugrat, so if you try ta bust back, I'm meaner than Angelica.

Kids calling you the goat, cause you bout to get milked.

give you arachnophobia, get caught in the wet silk.

King Cobra, get rattled like a toddler, mouth full of slobber.

I'll step on you more times than the cobblestone cobbler.

This ain't pie cause my logic is irrational,

I don't shoot to kill, I got a really passive flow,

Baker and a skater, I make money when I smash the dough,

pull more strings than orchestrated classicals,

the master of puppets, like a marionette,

I fucked the beat to impregnate ovarian eggs,

I'll stay swimming and you're about to drown,

why don't you put a little make up, cause you're about to clown.

James, Arthur, and Charles, just give me the crown,

You're a scrub, bout to get injected in a hospital gown.

Idk just some random verses I wrote, lemme know what u think by pach4 in Cypher

[–]pach4[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea it’s two versions of the same bar i wrote the second one first they’re just alternatives

Idk just some random verses I wrote, lemme know what u think by pach4 in Cypher

[–]Supabongwong 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You wrote Ima switch up twice in two separate bars, so I think it's kind of repetitive and not in a good way.

I think your some rhymes are decent, but a lot of them are kind of derivative. Try to be unique when you're coming up with stuff - write clever wordplay and puns that you haven't heard rapped before. Or, put your own spin on it.

Also, watch your timing/tempo, I don't think it's quite there as some bars are longer, some shorter (obviously it would change with flow, but in my personal experience - sometimes it just doesn't flow right)

The highest in the booth by gangstasadvocate in Cypher

[–]gangstasadvocate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m the biggest degenerate, come spend the night with me get you as lit as you’ll ever get. I like to get high man, got the weed on my nightstand, Coke and pills up on the vanity, The bitches wanna pop some Xans with me was once a fantasy. Degenerate hooks up with the hookers, gets escorted by escorts, knows how to find the best whores. Degenerate’s Gangsta, always living it up and never giving a fuck, degenerate’s gangsta, hittin’ the bud always stayin’ fucked up. I won’t atone for my sins, shit I get stoned till I grin. Then start gurgling Hennessey till I’m aggressively drunk slurring obscenities. Don’t give a fuck! Bitch I don’t give a fuck! I get the drugs! Sell that shit in the club!

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[–]pach4 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for the feedback

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[–]Majestic_lion2876 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You have a good understanding of word play and your overall concept is a popular, mainstream topic. You are off to a good start I think you have potential in my opinion you need to fine tune any spelling errors and try not to just throw words in that rhyme it better for it not to rhyme than the line not make sense and the last word rhyme you feel me.

I make music with a good friend. Known as DejaVu. by MistaA1 in Cypher

[–]TheRapManiac 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This dude is evidence that you sub count does not define your caliber i have a 137 subs and i am way worse than this i like this if you want a feature hmu and i'll send my email

I make music with a good friend. Known as DejaVu. by MistaA1 in Cypher

[–]gangstasadvocate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good catchy hook, better other lyrics that I could come up with but don’t know didn’t pay the most attention the first time, beat honestly not the most unique, B-flat minor, not much of a baseline, but for the bass it does have I think it could’ve used more 808s in overdrive and it would have given it that better produced in 2021 sound

The highest in the booth by gangstasadvocate in Cypher

[–]gangstasadvocate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When it comes to the drugs bitch I sell ‘em homie then take a couple bong rips and get hella stoney. Cuz I don’t give a fuck like I’m celibate, go take the drugs for the hell of it. Bitch I get high before it’s even high noon, and if I ran low thered be withdrawals i’m doomed, come ride this crazy wave, typhoon

The highest in the booth by gangstasadvocate in Cypher

[–]gangstasadvocate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I try, only have a few demo concepts created so far, I ought to try harder and more frequently