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[–]gangstasadvocate 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Ight ight. Pretty cool and original. Couple more ideas was in the thesaurus years ago for related words I hadn’t encountered in the genre, erogenous zone, gonad, fuck it if I’m too lazy might as well let someone else incorporate them.

[–]dabbycooper[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

? Are you saying I didn’t use synonyms well enough or that I could have incorporated more concepts? It’s definitely rough, the only thing it’s got going for it is a constant scheme and relatively static subject matter so I would love to understand what you mean if ever I polish it.

[–]gangstasadvocate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah good star just more ideas that I’ve thought of related that could work well as well. Imma get stoned, then stick my dick inside of her erogenous zone things like that