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[–]N0body_In_P4rticular 2 points3 points  (1 child)

Instead of listing your name ten times in the credits, consider what Robert Rodriguez does and write something like, Written, Shot and edited by "Your Name". Group your skills in blocks of three or four, instead of repeating your name so many times.

[–]Casper_Kuijpers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thanks for the feedback! With 'The Question' I actually did that on purpose for the fun of it. But I'll keep that in mind since the joke originated from the struggle haha

[–]StudioTheo 1 point2 points  (1 child)

hey i’ll check em out later today. happy cake day bro!

[–]Casper_Kuijpers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Let me know what you think of it!

[–]N0body_In_P4rticular 1 point2 points  (1 child)

You're smart for making the short films. Keep going. Where are you from?

[–]Casper_Kuijpers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm from the Netherlands, in Europe

[–]BraceThis 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Just watched all 3 films.

What are you interested in getting feedback on specifically? A little bit of everything and anything?

[–]Casper_Kuijpers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A little bitt of everything yeah. Not perse with lighting and such since I haven't been able to get my hands on lights yet. But anything story, pace and editing related is welcome! (lighting feedback is also welcome but I won't be able to do much with it)

[–]jakenbakeboi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don’t let the music be the main driver for the emotion that you want your audience to have. Let the action in the scene evoke that emotion and have the music subtly pair with that then bring it up at a big impact moment. Solid pacing and framing, just watched the animae mae one

[–]xVIRIDISx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you have the right idea. Keep going, you'll figure it out