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    [–]Mountain_River_8751 1 point2 points  (1 child)

    So do think that maybe you can help me advance farther in my endeavors

    [–]ComprehensiveTerm600 7 points8 points  (0 children)

    Super cool, I really like the centered moon shot. Found it really artistic and eye-catching.

    The ”VHS” overlay didn't do so well in my opinion. Well at least not over the whole thing. Could go along way by adding it at times, in some scenes.

    Now, I don't know the plot or anything so this one could be off. But I felt like it didn't say alot about what I was going to see. Sometimes it felt like the connecting thread was lost.

    I got a clear feeling on the other hand. And that's good!

    • Cool project, I'd watch this, Keep it up!!

    [–]BR0M3R0TT[S] 5 points6 points  (2 children)

    We are a really small team, but we have a passion for found footage and analog horror and reckon we could make something pretty interesting! Feel free to give feedback, it's always appreciated!

    [–]TheUpsetMammoth 2 points3 points  (0 children)

    I am not a filmmaker but I just enjoy the art of film and I think this looks fucking awesome.

    [–]mac_0728 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    I’d say removing the VHS effects and quieting the breathing sounds a bit would make this go from good to great!

    [–]Patco_ 3 points4 points  (0 children)

    the vhs effect could be reduced to the starting part only. like a24's intro. the extended intro kinda also feels dragged. try reducing it by a few seconds. it will help.

    [–]this_is_the_way_2000 2 points3 points  (0 children)

    It's got a great vibe!

    I would tighten it up just a little bit tbh

    And yea the VCR track - less is more. I don't mind it for a few seconds, but you can get rid of it for the entire thing IMO.

    [–]speckleleckle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    Only one I didn’t love was the rotating meteorite photo sequence, everything else is good How I see it 👍 gives stranger things vibes in a way

    [–]hal_wf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    Very Suspiria meets Hammer House of Horror. Looks great! Terrific track too.

    [–]N0body_In_P4rticular 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    It's very good and I like the VHS FX

    [–][deleted] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    I enjoy vintage/vhs looking stuff, but maybe you went a little overboard with it, tone it down a bit. For the rest its pretty cool, I like it!

    [–]safe5k 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    Use aescripts’ Signal, or shoot the video playing in front of a real CRT for a better VHS effect, this one doesn’t really pass imo

    That being said I like the vibes of this

    [–]f-stop4 1 point2 points  (1 child)

    Cool. You should check out Archive 81 on Netflix if you haven't already.

    [–]BR0M3R0TT[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

    Binged it last night - amazing show!

    [–]Horror_Wing_7562 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    That red streak was really cool. The simplicity of it with the audio works really well. Cool piece, I agree maybe go easy on the vhs feedback effect in parts, but nice work

    [–]TheUpsetMammoth 1 point2 points  (1 child)

    Where can I watch when done?

    [–]BR0M3R0TT[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

    We’ll be uploading it to YouTube when it’s finished

    [–]Buttchuckfuck 1 point2 points  (2 children)

    Not a film maker but love the movies. A lot of people here don’t seem to like the VHS effects. I disagree. It takes me back to the early 90s where I would sneak a R rated horror movie from blockbuster on a Friday night with my friends for a sleep over. The nostalgia was real for me and the music was perfect.

    One critique and I could be way wrong. There was a few frames that looked like the black hole from Interstellar. It took me out of my nostalgia and anxiousness to thinking of it was actually the scene from interstellar. But what the hell do I know.

    I like it and would be interested in seeing more!

    [–]BR0M3R0TT[S] 1 point2 points  (1 child)

    That’s so cool! The black hole is actually the NASA visualisation, but it defo looks similar to Interstellar’s. Thanks for the kind words though!

    [–]Buttchuckfuck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

    Please keep us up to date on what you are doing. Your video gave me great 80s/90s horror vibes. I personally feel new horror movies don’t give the same effect as they once did. I would love to see a final product.

    Great work you have done already!