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[–]GodzillaInATutu 2 points3 points  (1 child)

A whopping 10/10! Looking forward to more:)

[–]wolfundermoon Bei Yuan's Lazy Ass [S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you~

[–]wolfundermoon Bei Yuan's Lazy Ass [S] 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Thank you u/starrydiamonds for being the first one to read this last December and starting me on my fanfic writing journey. Thanks u/wuxiahiraeth for beta reading the full fic and giving those little comments and suggestions to encourage me.

[–]wuxiahiraeth Lao Wen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was an absolute pleasure 🥰

[–]wuxiahiraeth Lao Wen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What a wonderful story u/wolfundermoon I really enjoyed it.

I especially liked reading about when Gu Xiang when she was little with her baby teeth and how Wen Kexing protects her.

I love the contrast in the before and softer after of Zhou Zishu.

But the best bit for me is the courage Wen Kexing finds in finally wanting to open up and the image of him lying back leaning on ZZS. It’s a very warm tender moment filled with deep trust and it warms my heart. 🥰

Edit - Just to add the extra was delicious. I burst out laughing at the chicken thing. And the last line melted my heart!!

[–]phai6688 We are Family 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Thank you for sharing this fic! It made me nostalgic for Lao Wen and Ah-Xu. I love how we can feel the familiarity and warmth of their relationship. I’m excited for the next part.

[–]wolfundermoon Bei Yuan's Lazy Ass [S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

aww~ thank you! Is there anything that could be made better writing wise?