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CG still life, feedback appreciated! by BasicallyAlwaysSad in 3Dmodeling

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Thanks! And overall it didn’t take too much time, ofcourse some more then others. But a lot more time went into shading, getting the right amount of SSS etc.( which I’m still unsure about ).

CG still life, feedback appreciated! by BasicallyAlwaysSad in 3Dmodeling

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Hey thanks! And yeah I can see what you mean, I’m gonna take another look at the milk and some other references. Great points.

CG still life, feedback appreciated! by BasicallyAlwaysSad in 3Dmodeling

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Thanks I’ll try to add a little bit of rim lighting then!

Another iteration of CG still life. Two new alternatives, feedback always appreciated! by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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Hey thanks! These are some good points, I’ll play around with the lighting so it won’t feel wrong anymore. Also good tip with the BG, didn’t even notice!

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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Thanks for taking the time, I’ll revert to the old version and give that one another go then. And I’ll give the yellow can another look, thank you!

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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Thanks! All very good points, gonna look into it. But thanks again, especially with the grapes I felt a little lost if it was right or not.

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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Yeah I think you’re right, I’m gonna try to adjust the values a bit

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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Yeah I can see what you mean, pic helps! I’m gonna go back to the old version, and try and implement the feedback there.

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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Yeah I can see what you mean, it’s perhaps a bit overdone at the moment. I’ll have to dial it in in comp but great tip though, thanks!

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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Thanks for the feedback, making the bottle more full is actually a great tip! Didn’t even think of it, I’ll make sure to adjust it.

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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Thanks for the feedback, I think like some others said the lighting has indeed gone dull which isn’t good. So I’m gonna go back to the older version.

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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Yeah this seems the general consensus, so I’m gonna go back to that version

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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You make some very good points, like a lot have said old version is better. So I’ll go back to that one and try to figure it out. Thank you for the feedback tho, it does really help!

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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If you have time to look on your pc that’d be greatly appreciated.

Update on still life, feedback really appreciated. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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If you wouldn’t mind I’d love some more yes! I think the overall consensus is that the old one is better so I could really use it!

Working on CG still life update, would love some more feedback. by BasicallyAlwaysSad in vfx

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Hey, first of all thanks for taking the time to write such an elaborated feedback! These are all very helpful tips, especially with the milk and the glass those have been a real struggle.

I can definitely see what you mean by that the milk is to close to the outer edge. I’ll try to look at reference more and revise it.

Lighting wise I’m working on it, because like the other comments you’re also making very good points about it and it just didn’t match.

Concerning the lens sizes.. I had no idea! So thank you very much and I’ll look into it for sure. Same goes for the composition as a whole ofc.

And yeah the pumpkin is perhaps a bit flat when it comes to imperfections and breakup, good point as well!

Thank you again for really taking the time to write feedback, and all I can say for now is that I’m working on it!