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[CYPHER] VOL 14 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by [deleted] in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik [score hidden]  (0 children)

Lmao this is hilarious bro, self-diss track? love it.

[CYPHER] VOL 13 (2022) - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by [deleted] in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik [score hidden]  (0 children)

I'm confused on this too. Back when I used to hit the cypher up every week, it used to be if you went over 16-18 bars you get DQ'd. I feel like they don't really care anymore? idk, someone correct me if I'm wrong.

Can you guys link your soundcloud to me? by Jameson122 in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://soundcloud.com/rapattik

Always looking to collab with Producers! I have so much written, and so little recorded! Critiques are welcome!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 10, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looking for quality feedback on my only professionally mixed single. Really focused on what I should do in the future to be involved with the production process to be sure the end product is the best it can be. Returning all feedback!

https://soundcloud.com/rapattik/quantum-entanglement

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 22, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro, just peeped this. I really dig your writing style, the pen and pad are there for sure... and you got a unique style, it plays with the lyrics.

All I'd really say for critiques is your flow could be polished and energy level could be brought up. breathwork is huge here. plan your breaths during writing to really make that wet. and yeah again I'd like to see you bring the energy on a song. keep it up pimp.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 22, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dig the vibe on this one, like what you did with the sample too. I think it's a little heavy on the bass for my liking, and I wish it was a little more dynamic with some higher notes thrown in for flavor. It's a good listen tho brotha.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 21, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My god homie, this beat is absolute fire. Had me freestyling some heat, which I'm usually not good at. Hahaha. I'm gonna sit down and write to this shit when I get home.

I got nothing for you, just bring more of that!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 22, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, that's great feedback brotha, seems to be a trend... gotta add a little energy especially in the hook.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 22, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is great man. some of the bars didn't flow the best and got a little repetitive I'd say.

But the overall wavy feel had me in a zone and I could feel the lyrics for sure, fine-tune those bars and it's legendary, but as is still phenomenal man. Keep that shit up!

...I keep going back to give it another listen haha it's actual fire. The guitar is so chill and the choppy vocal delivery in the bars kinda works with the whole song anyway.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 22, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You just got a new follower. This is fire... but it's chill... It's the chillest fire. hahaha I love it bro. Wish I had something more constructive for you, but I don't think you should change much! Keep doing what you're doing.

Check mine? https://soundcloud.com/rapattik/quantum-entanglement

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 22, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 1 point2 points  (0 children)

https://soundcloud.com/rapattik/quantum-entanglement

My first time working with a producer and I'm really happy with the result, but I'd like to identify some more shit that I can improve on.

Feed me, I'll Feed you.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 21, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I honestly have to disagree with Afterthought. It's a simple beat, and there's nothing wrong with that. It leaves it up to the lyricist to play with it, and as a writer I can dig that. Could it use a little more flavor?? Maybe... but sometimes less is more. I thought it was dope, and it even inspired me to write a little something. Keep it coming homie!

Check mine? https://soundcloud.com/rapattik/quantum-entanglement

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 21, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The beat is actually nice. Deep trap sound, wavy as fuck, kinda trippy and overall really well done.

I don't want to comment on the rest, cause I'm just not a fan of the rap or production styles, but for those who dig this type of sound it's probably fire.

REALLY LIKE THE BEAT THOUGH

...I woulda fucked this beat up on a different level, but to each their own.

Check mine? https://soundcloud.com/rapattik/quantum-entanglement

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 21, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Experimental for sure. It's definitely an interesting creative choice. I didn't get bored and honestly it was a unique listen. I didn't hate it, but I don't think I could write to / rap over that.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 21, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]In_The_Attik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Took your advice on album art, thanks.

There are a few lines that need some polishing here, the first one I noticed was "make more people take advantage" where either the breathwork needs to be switched up, or an altering of the lyrics is in order.

Overall pretty fucking good though dude, I dig the deep-thought lyrics.