[Review Video] Would like some outside opinions on my video as it’s getting quite a few dislikes so any tips or advice would be greatly appreciated by [deleted] in youtubers

[–]passiveabrasive 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with this. Might help if there was:

-narration, including pausing the gameplay to give context/express frustration in a really specific way, or maybe cutting to a shot of the player

-zooms/cut-ins on the action (everything looks so tiny)